- how they look, sound, smell
- how they speak, move and act.
- How they behave towards others.
- about their belongings and the environment they are in.
- First paragraph - describe this person/character - how they look, sound, smell. This is the physical description. Show don't tell. Be specific.
- Second paragraph - describe the behavior - how they speak and act. What makes this character unique - a laugh, a way of talking, a way of moving
- Third paragraph - discuss how this character affects other people. What they do to the other characters. We are now dealing with reputation. Make the character come alive.
- Fourth paragraph - describe the character's belongings and environment.
Who am i?
My costume color is red and blue.i can hear danger and screaming from a miles.
I speak normal language. I act like an assassin
He makes friends with other people with powers too and fight who harms them
My person is a person he has a special suit with power that can produce webs and swing with it
Hi Ivan, I'm Ivan from Room 23. I like your "Who am I" blog post very much. I think the character is spider man from marvel. Next time you should add lesser and harder hints about your character. If you are interested, this is my blogs link https://odsziw.blogspot.com/ blog you later.
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