Thursday 31 October 2019

 Remember to show don't tell:
  1. how they look, sound, smell
  2. how they speak, move and act.
  3. How they behave towards others.
  4. about their belongings and the environment they are in.

  1. First paragraph -  describe this person/character - how they look, sound, smell. This is the physical description. Show don't tell. Be specific.
  2. Second paragraph - describe the behavior - how they speak and act.  What makes this character unique - a laugh, a way of talking, a way of moving
  3. Third paragraph - discuss how this character affects other people. What they do to the other characters. We are now dealing with reputation. Make the character come alive.
  4. Fourth paragraph  - describe the character's belongings and environment.


Who am i?  

My costume color is red and blue.i can hear danger and screaming from a miles.

I speak normal language. I act like an assassin 

He makes friends with other people with powers too and fight who harms them

 My person is a person he has a special suit with power that can produce webs and swing with it

2 comments:

  1. Hi Ivan Im Liam from Grey Main School.

    I like how you showed what you have to do in the top.

    Did you find this fun?

    See ya Ivan.

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  2. Hi Ivan, I'm Ivan from Room 23. I like your "Who am I" blog post very much. I think the character is spider man from marvel. Next time you should add lesser and harder hints about your character. If you are interested, this is my blogs link https://odsziw.blogspot.com/ blog you later.

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