Remember to show don't tell:

1. how they look, sound, smell
2. how they speak, move and act.
3. How they behave towards others.
4. about their belongings and the environment they are in.

1. First paragraph -  describe this person/character - how they look, sound, smell. This is the physical description. Show don't tell. Be specific.
2. Second paragraph - describe the behavior - how they speak and act.  What makes this character unique - a laugh, a way of talking, a way of moving
3. Third paragraph - discuss how this character affects other people. What they do to the other characters. We are now dealing with reputation. Make the character come alive.
4. Fourth paragraph  - describe the character's belongings and environment.

Who am i?  

My costume color is red and blue.i can hear danger and screaming from a miles.

I speak normal language. I act like an assassin 

He makes friends with other people with powers too and fight who harms them

 My person is a person he has a special suit with power that can produce webs and swing with it

My Hoiday

25.10.19

My holiday

 I went to the top of Sky tower with my mum and dad with our neighbors . We go to fishing at a dock my  mum got the big one my dad got a big one and I got many small fishes.

I only read 1 book in the holidays but it was 462 pages long, the book's name was the maze of the beasts.

We went to the zoo I saw a lot of animals like tigers,lions,monkeys,pandas and alot more